Revisit The Hill Poem by John A'Hern

Revisit The Hill

Rating: 5.0


Stumbling up a favourite hill
A day like no other listening to the distant thunder
The top it waits there challenging still
Thoughts and memories collide
When younger, running was your choice
The hilltop is reached, wind is your only friend
No human voices or traffic noises
You sit half falling to the ground
Gather breath then settle down
You look over the Town of birth
It helped you when you where down
If it had arms it would hug
The clock starts ticking when we are born
The hands of the clock move on and on
Photos and memories locked in each tick tock
Where has the time allotted disappeared
Older age recognition of older faces
Inside feelings young at heart
Your body aches even when you ask
You move to lay upon your back
Staring at a cloudy angry sky
Thunder noises moving closer
Flashing lights as lightning invades
Your eyes they close, memories impose
This is the spot you would choose as remembrance

Saturday, August 11, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: memory,vision
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A visit back to the Hill I imagined I owned as a child and into teenage years.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geoffrey Fafard 11 August 2018

A storm without and a storm within....Ah the mix of emotions when we look back John. I really like this write, it stirs me. Good one my friend....Geoffrey.

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John Ahern 11 August 2018

Thank you, Geoffrey, I am always looking back these days.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 August 2018

Stumbling favorite hill with vision of broadness motivates mind and this poem is really very wisely penned...10

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John Ahern 11 August 2018

Thank you Kumarmani Mahakul, for taking the time (one of our most valuable resources) to read and comment.

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