And one day near the green, mild paddy fields
By the green pacific villages,
Singing a folks alluring hymn
In unsung favorite rhyme,
The village birds greet me
My opened eyes see.
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Reza syllabic Verse (Edited, Revised And Additional Version) :
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6 lines poem ─
Syllables meter: 10 in the 1st line,9 in the 2nd,8 in the 3rd,7 in the 4th,
6 in the 5thand 5 in the 6th line (10-9-8-7-6-5) .
Syllables may be stressed or unstressed.
Rhyme scheme: iambic; ababcc; ababcd; abbacc; aabbcc
The aabbcc will be Heroic Reza syllabic Verse.
A simple refrain of 5th line may be as 6th line; if no refrain,
the 6th line will be an individual one.
Copyright © Muzahidul Reza │3 March,2018
A lovely poem that captures the beauty of a village..Great picture!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Great, great, outstanding rhyme and hymn, thanks for so great a poem