In my blue sky you are the only star
I am an ordinary planet,
Bound to orbit you at a speed
When you orbit the other,
But accompany me
Simply that all see.
About:
Reza syllabic Verse (Edited, Revised And Additional Version) :
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
6 lines poem ─
Syllables meter: 10 in the 1st line,9 in the 2nd,8 in the 3rd,7 in the 4th,
6 in the 5thand 5 in the 6th line (10-9-8-7-6-5) .
Syllables may be stressed or unstressed.
Rhyme scheme: iambic; ababcc; ababcd; abbacc; aabbcc
The aabbcc will be Heroic Reza syllabic Verse.
A simple refrain of 5th line may be as 6th line; if no refrain,
the 6th line will be an individual one.
Copyright © Muzahidul Reza │22 March,2018
From your poet's note I knew about ''Reza syllabic Verse It is six lines poem; having syllables meters 10,9,8,7,6, and 5 top to bottom. Syllables may be stressed or unstressed. Rhyme schemes are: iambic; ababcc; ababcd; abbacc; aabbcc (on any one) I found your poem in this system. It is a beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.
In my blue sky you are the only star I am an ordinary planet, Bound to orbit you at a speed When you orbit the other, But accompany me Simply that all see.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Unconditional Love a great written with great imagery, thanks for the poem