Herbert Nehrlich

Rookie (04 October 1943 / Germany)

Rhyme - Poem by Herbert Nehrlich

Rhyme and meter
totter, teeter,
those who do
(maybe you?) .
Must make certain
that the curtain
of exposure
triggers closure,
it takes guts,
patient butts,
agile fingers,
mood that lingers
to create
the great state
of a trance.
Like a dance
spirits lifting
love thoughts drifting
so sublime
exquisite rhyme.

Comments about Rhyme by Herbert Nehrlich

  • (8/20/2005 7:59:00 AM)

    I like the rhythm...you can sort of feel a beat behind it...Good write. (Report) Reply

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  • (8/20/2005 6:45:00 AM)

    This poem flows and works perfectly, H. (Report) Reply

  • (8/20/2005 5:36:00 AM)

    i like these meter maid's here on the goldcoast gets my mind of poetry

    Warm regards allan
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 20, 2005

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