Tuesday, June 3, 2014

Rhymes Of Football Comments

Rating: 3.0

Net to net rolls the ball
with the feet fast they scroll
the kicks find the bar too small
too hard to score a goal!
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Pradip Chattopadhyay
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Brian Jani 16 June 2014

Wow this poem is good hey

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Susy Evelyne 07 June 2014

Interesting, atmospheric and timely! An elegant opening line.

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Dorothy Sinha 07 June 2014

FIFA 2014 fever grips the Bong.. he longs for the tickle under his feet.. the slender green grass underneath.. the kick of the ball high in the air .. or the dribble for which he knows he has a flair.. those men in blue, those men in whites.. who thump their chests when the angle's offside.. or when the kick meets the bar yet again they have to manoeuvre through the defence, crack the maze correctly gauge the distance of the bars perfect timing is what makes the stars who invent a new way to celebrate.. each time they manage to navigate.. into the goal's mouth.. a million voices unanimously shout - GOAL! !

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