Wednesday, May 22, 2013

Riddle Rap~ Comments

Rating: 5.0

Socket taps
Electrical gaps
And whatever in between
No privacy
...
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Theodora (Theo) Onken
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Quincy 22 September 2020

That was good

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Theodora Onken 26 March 2017

For Joseph Narusiewicz - the listener.... You really know how to bug' us! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Theodora Onken 26 March 2017

i wrote this one with Joseph Narusiewicz (electrician) in mind. We call him the listener A lesson in life that Bugs us to this day!

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Theodora Onken 23 May 2013

Thank you David for your kind words!

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David Wood 23 May 2013

A sparkling little gem of a poem. I loved it: -)

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Theodora Onken 22 May 2013

Thank you Paul. Your words mean a lot to me. Also, the fact that you even read my poetry means everything. : O)

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Paul Brookes 22 May 2013

Good poem I know its a rap but after all it's a kind of poetry, well yours is and beautifully penned. 10/10 BB : O)

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