Riddle Rap~ Poem by Theodora (Theo) Onken

Riddle Rap~

Rating: 5.0


Socket taps
Electrical gaps
And whatever in between
No privacy
Just lunacy
Heard but rarely seen;

Socket taps
G.E. maps
And conversation's heard
No man's castle
Only a big hassle
In the home of the Word Bird;

Socket taps
Garden Snaps
Hidden out of sight
Back yard green
No in between
Thanks Be To The Light! ;

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Our Daily Life In Rap

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By, Theodora Onken

May 22,2013
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paul Brookes 22 May 2013

Good poem I know its a rap but after all it's a kind of poetry, well yours is and beautifully penned. 10/10 BB : O)

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Theodora Onken 22 May 2013

Thank you Paul. Your words mean a lot to me. Also, the fact that you even read my poetry means everything. : O)

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Quincy 22 September 2020

That was good

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Theodora Onken 26 March 2017

For Joseph Narusiewicz - the listener.... You really know how to bug' us! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Theodora Onken 26 March 2017

i wrote this one with Joseph Narusiewicz (electrician) in mind. We call him the listener A lesson in life that Bugs us to this day!

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Theodora Onken 23 May 2013

Thank you David for your kind words!

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David Wood 23 May 2013

A sparkling little gem of a poem. I loved it: -)

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