Right Cause Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Right Cause

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Right cause
Thursday,25th October 2018

"No title
Monday,22nd October 2018

Many poems go unread
I feel like dead
Gloom descended and pushed me to the dead end

Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta"


I felt so insulted
When someone told me it is unsuited
As such a theme can be called negative thinking
And creates no good inkling

I was taken aback
When it was staked
That such things should not be aired
I sensed that he was feared

Why people should fail
To report what is truth and must avail
At the given opportunity
And enforce the remedy

"Sir, My poems are not read"
"I feel like the dead"
I took his cause
Thought over it and paused for a while

Why should a poet be given cold shudder?
Can we not console him and offer
With some comments about his creation
I thought over it and addressed the question

Hasmukh Mehta

Right Cause
Wednesday, October 24, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 October 2018

welcome najnin akhtar 1 Manage Like · Reply · 1m

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 October 2018

You are a nice poet and go on writing. Your duty is to write. You do this. Please do not listen to others what they say back to you and do not bother at all if they defame. Keep trust on God and and on your duty. Who said that yours poems are not read? ? Am not I reading this poem right now? ? Yes, we read your poems. If comments are not given it does not mean that poems are not read. There is no need to feel like dead. You are alive poet! This amazing poem is excellently written.10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 October 2018

welcome andre jane cabrera 1 Manage Like · Reply · 1m

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 October 2018

Andrea Jane CabreraAndrea Jane and 3 others manage the membership, moderators, settings, and posts for English Chat Group + Poems & Quotes. Sublime Poem sir 1 Manage Like · Reply · 1m

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 October 2018

Andrea Jane CabreraAndrea Jane and 3 others manage the membership, moderators, settings, and posts for English Chat Group + Poems & Quotes. Hasmukh Mehta pleasure sir 1 Manage Like · Reply · 8m

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 November 2022

Typo: dear poet (not poetess)

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 November 2022

An excellent poem dear poetess. Loved the beautiful comment of poet Kumarmani G

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 October 2018

Interesting write thanks Hasmukh😊😊

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 October 2018

Maryam Faith HopeMaryam and 9 others are consistently creating meaningful discussions with their posts. Awesome and realistic lines sir. Keep sharing. 1 Manage Like · Reply · 1h

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 October 2018

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