Rival Is My Friend Comments

Lights on ... here is a photo getting faded... a very powerful beginning... makes your interest so much in the poem.... creatively written... shows your class

I like the two side light on and light off...it's creative and about that friend...wow that's really warming..i can feel it too! _Unwritten Soul

A superb poem with a dramatic with some very dark undertones! A fine read of the day.