Rival Is My Friend Poem by wabi sabi

Rival Is My Friend

Rating: 5.0


Lights on

Here is a photo getting faded.
You have a big smile in it.

Probably you don't remember what you said to me when you were drunk.
'I'll keep you as my company'

Lights off

Something with you haunts.
I stay warmed.

The nights will be gone.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kanav Justa 11 December 2012

Lights on ... here is a photo getting faded... a very powerful beginning... makes your interest so much in the poem.... creatively written... shows your class

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Unwritten Soul 22 February 2012

I like the two side light on and light off...it's creative and about that friend...wow that's really warming..i can feel it too! _Unwritten Soul

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Pheko Motaung 22 February 2012

A superb poem with a dramatic with some very dark undertones! A fine read of the day.

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