Friday, December 14, 2018

River, A Maid Of Poetry Comments

Rating: 5.0

She, born of height, cradled by lofty crest,
Mothered by mounts, and reared by little brooks,
Dancing down sprightly, a stream still modest,
Oft hiding hind hillocks, crannies and nooks,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Valsa George 17 December 2018

You have traced the entire course of the river from a mere trickle to a small stream and a mouth wide cataract to a mighty river making its headlong journey to join the sea at the end.! Lovely poem!

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Aniruddha Pathak 18 December 2018

Thank you, Ms Valsa George, a poem liked is like a letter well delivered.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 December 2018

A very wel penned poem it is dear sir, so haunting and thrilling expression with lofty theme. Thank you a lot.10

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Aniruddha Pathak 16 December 2018

Thank you Kumarmani, you are kind and liberal. Your feedback comes straight from heart.

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