River, A Maid Of Poetry Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

River, A Maid Of Poetry

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She, born of height, cradled by lofty crest,
Mothered by mounts, and reared by little brooks,
Dancing down sprightly, a stream still modest,
Oft hiding hind hillocks, crannies and nooks,
In no time to resurface once again,
A new avatar, a wide-mouth waterfall,
Cascading down and in utter disdain,
Meandering river to be in thrall,
Thence, at long last to be an estuary,
Sprawling, shallow, wide-mouth and slower still,
Destined to embrace sea, fulfilled to be—
One, with option nor yet a free self-will!
No, no maid rushing forth to embrace sea,
She's painted so in fancied poetry.
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Rivers are painted in fancy by poets, the most common being that of a bride rushing sprightly down to meet her beau, the sea. The plain truth however is: water flows down seeking gravity.
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Sonnets | 02.02.12 |

Friday, December 14, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: poetry,rivers
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 17 December 2018

You have traced the entire course of the river from a mere trickle to a small stream and a mouth wide cataract to a mighty river making its headlong journey to join the sea at the end.! Lovely poem!

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Aniruddha Pathak 18 December 2018

Thank you, Ms Valsa George, a poem liked is like a letter well delivered.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 December 2018

A very wel penned poem it is dear sir, so haunting and thrilling expression with lofty theme. Thank you a lot.10

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Aniruddha Pathak 16 December 2018

Thank you Kumarmani, you are kind and liberal. Your feedback comes straight from heart.

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