R ight at your feet
O r can't you see
C ollect a treasure
K ept them for me
S imply a Rock
An interesting acrostic write that emphasizes the importance of rocks. I liked the colored ones. Sometimes rocks conceal precious gems.
Thank you all for your comments! My family often searches for rocks, on the beach, in a stream bed, most anywhere. We like to show off our finds to each other!
A very fine piece! May I pose a question? The lines seem to indicate that the poet is receiving a rock from somebody who sees the beauty in it. When I was very young I would give pieces of gravel that I thought pretty as gifts to my grandmother. Is this perhaps your experience too?
One of the best lines comes from the viewpoint of a miner: 'Each stone within my hand is a wonder I will never understand'
A beautiful poem! It makes me think of the the song 'A Mining Song' by Clamavi De Profundis.
Rocks aren't given enough credit. You've done the justice, Rob!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Well written : ) Indeed, even a simple rock picked up in some forest or on a stretch of beach can become a treasure! This poem makes me think of my grandfather, he loved collecting rocks anywhere he went!