Rocks In The Stream Poem by elysabeth faslund

pointing to the sound of the rocks in the river, i think rimbaud got me to listen, nice piece elysabeth, as always i leave you thinking

I love the language in this poem. Its syncopated rhythm and assonance strengthen the tough realities at the central core of the poem.

Very well done Liz.....! ! ! Best, Trade.

Do believe that Ms. Elysabeth could make anything work, shes that brillant! Best wishes, Elysabeth, Theo

Talking to a rock? Your poem makes it work. More than work. I too would like to interview these 'inner occupants.' You have already done it for me and raised questions for the reader to ponder. Thank you. Tom