Room Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

Room

Rating: 5.0


'Twas my favourite land,
Where I liv'd for a long time
It fed me with its wet wheat,
E'en in my darkened misery of hungry
It swept away all my wounded tears,
With a piece of rag,
From the valley of my fragile mind
As though a mother caressing,
And hugging her child
You nurtured me all the time
Thou' my soul was drenching in despair
By hiding the uncountable frenzies
Of my endurance days,
I live there for a long time
I was a lamenting bird,
Of a sullen grey sky
Who built his nest on top of a tomb
Where he await'd for his dreams
To be flourishing in time
Amid all the agonies, I forgot my curse
As I could have fallen asleep,
In my room, in my room
where I lived for a long time..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Harindhar Reddy 09 February 2012

poignant write! Simply by speaking about his room poet is speaking about his life indirectly as whole world is global village! Any nice thoughts took the poetic form in this poem! Good work!

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Sumanta Roy 26 September 2011

In the poem i like early lines most.

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Allemagne Roßmann 28 August 2011

Good memory and poignant write..good poetry here.

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