Save Me!

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I open the casement of my soul
To encamp me into your tent of life,
As I'm a temporary tenant in this world,
I want to be with the one I believe.

Be a shining loadstar to my sky
And guide me to elysian savanna,
Through your astral path,
And feed me with your manna.

Pour in my heart the elixir of love;
As my heart wants to be a cirrus cloud
Be a rising Sun in every dawn
And be a vesper in every eve.

The land and the sky are wide,
But nor I can walk or fly here
As I'm legless and wingless
In front of the stare of the world

But I cannot hide my eyes from their gaze.
When the dark clouds of my despair,
Glomerating and gushing incessant tears,
Of remorse in my every noon of night.

I drown into a bottomless abyss,
In the sea of my wounded tears
Where I drink the salinity of sin.
Where I'm alone and dying alive

O, Save me from this hell,
Lave my sin wholly,
And give me a holy life.
''I'll be your Slave for ever''.
Thursday, September 29, 2011
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COMMENTS
Craig Moses Uche 13 February 2018
Nice really depicts emotion
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yada uche 06 December 2017
as I am legless and wingless In front of the stare of the world Top stuff
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Craig Moses Uche 06 December 2017
as I am legless and wingless In front of the stair of the world! ! ! U ar good!
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Edward Kofi Louis 04 April 2016
Where i'm alone and dying alive. Nice piece of work.
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Edward Kofi Louis 04 April 2016
Ehrte i'm alone and dying alive. Nice piece of work.
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Valsa George 05 April 2015
This prayer, I am sure has gone up to the Heavens! It has the strength and poignancy to melt even a rock hearted brute! Then think of God who is Mercy Immaculate..... He will wrap you so endearingly in His robe and hold you closer to His bosom! Glad to see you back Vipins!
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Walterrean Salley 08 December 2011
To encounter misfortune as a sojourner in a strange place is greatly despairing, as the heart turns to God, its only Help - seeking pity with a remorseful plea, knowing that the time for an inevitable change is come. Deep and poignant with powerful message.
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Harindhar Reddy 03 November 2011
'And I'm drowning to a bottomless abyss in that sea of tears, By swallowing the salinity of sin.' I have no words to express..... I just remember John Keats eternal poetic line 'If he is poet, sure a love too! A can see profound pall of gloom sprinkled in some of your love poems. I think you are a genuine lover. But I am sure that you have a swallowed the dictionary.......There is passion and desire in your poems.... Outstanding write... Give you a royal treat.....
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Louis Cecile 15 October 2011
An exceptional use of language that is always a delight to read. A very visual poem that gives a poignant point.
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Lenore Lee 12 October 2011
This is an amazing poem, it describes perfectly the way humans wait for love to come and save them and when it does we will willingly be bound to them for all of time. I love it.
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