Room For Improvement For Leslie Poem by ivor or ivor.e hogg

Room For Improvement For Leslie

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Critics express their point of view.
As they have every right to do
I will give credit where it’s due.
So I consider each review
as of potential benefit
Though I may not agree with it.
It may well be I can profit
by reading what my critics writ.
I treat all critiques just the same
accepting praise accepting blame.
All part and parcel of the game.
Improvement is my only aim.
So please feel free to state your view
You might well teach me something new.

13-Feb-09
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM

perfect. the rhyming is perfect. i like.

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Rani Turton 14 February 2009

A text full of wisdom, maturity and serenity. Great!

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Stephen Stirk 14 February 2009

My view is that this is a great piece of work. Look me up some time Steve

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