Rubaiyat - His Trust Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Rubaiyat - His Trust

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I don't have parachute still dare to jump from sky
I don't have wings but still dare to fly
I know I am mortal still dare to live a life
His trust on me as human is my real dare and trail.

Sunday, September 6, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: rubaiyat
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
T Rajan Evol 07 September 2015

Serious Rubaiyat, In your own style, keep writing four liners, you are very good in four liner. God bless you.

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Sanjukta Nag 06 September 2015

I know I am mortal still dare to live a life............ Such a wise thought.. and a philosophical undertone flowing through the lines. thanks a lot

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 06 September 2015

His trust on me as a human is my real dare and trail Loved reading it.

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M Asim Nehal 06 September 2015

Thanks for reading my work, I appreciate your comments.

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Rajnish Manga 06 September 2015

Your Rubaiyat are a pleasure to read. This one also has philosophic undertones. Thanks for sharing.

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M Asim Nehal 06 September 2015

Thanks much for your kind words of appreciation.

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