M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 166,552 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Rubaiyat - His Trust - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

I don't have parachute still dare to jump from sky
I don't have wings but still dare to fly
I know I am mortal still dare to live a life
His trust on me as human is my real dare and trail.

Topic(s) of this poem: rubaiyat

Form: Free Verse

Comments about Rubaiyat - His Trust by M. Asim Nehal

  • (9/7/2015 2:24:00 AM)

    Serious Rubaiyat, In your own style, keep writing four liners, you are very good in four liner. God bless you. (Report) Reply

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  • Sanjukta Nag (9/6/2015 11:30:00 PM)

    I know I am mortal still dare to live a life............ Such a wise thought.. and a philosophical undertone flowing through the lines. thanks a lot (Report) Reply

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (9/6/2015 1:31:00 PM)

    His trust on me as a human is my real dare and trail
    Loved reading it.
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    Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/6/2015 1:41:00 PM)

    Thanks for reading my work, I appreciate your comments.

  • Rajnish Manga (9/6/2015 12:23:00 AM)

    Your Rubaiyat are a pleasure to read. This one also has philosophic undertones. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/6/2015 1:40:00 PM)

    Thanks much for your kind words of appreciation.

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 6, 2015

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