Seema Jayaraman

Gold Star - 14,440 Points (24 Aug / Mumbai)

Rude Awakening - Poem by Seema Jayaraman

Bouncing in nets of sleep
carousing winky waves -
gently, I lay
grasping dreams grey
In a Castle built on clouds
- shattered my slumber
rude awakening indeed
Squabbling flock of Jade
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Copyright ©Seema Jayaraman, Mumbai 5Nov2015 All Rights Reserved

Topic(s) of this poem: dawn

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Rude Awakening by Seema Jayaraman

  • (11/5/2015 12:39:00 AM)


    switch on the air con and windows tight
    you will wake up only when the sun shines bright
    thanks
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    Seema Jayaraman Seema Jayaraman (11/5/2015 1:34:00 AM)

    Trying to save on carbon footprint. Thanks.

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  • Rahman Henry (11/4/2015 10:49:00 PM)


    Beautifully expressed, lovely poem. (Report) Reply

    Seema Jayaraman Seema Jayaraman (11/5/2015 1:35:00 AM)

    Sleep before awakening is so precious.

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 4, 2015



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