Rudraksha - Xlvi To L Poem by Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair

Rudraksha - Xlvi To L

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XLVI

Every sculpture born in the camp is a beauty embodiment.
Far from the crowd, under the cool shade of wayside grove
The workshop seems to me a piece of paradise fallen down
With it's inhabitant Gods and their subjects as a holy team.

XLVII

The nomadic sculptor appears to me as yourself in disguise;
I look around keenly for your immortally noble of creations
There lie Lord Krishna, Jesus Christ and Raja Harischandra
Devoid of life for dedication, sacrifice and truthfulness.

XLVIII

I strain to see any in the hierarchy to uphold heritage
Culture, custom, name and fame of my beloved mother land;
The faculty of your dear creations has been seen redefined
To suit loot, cheat, corruption, deception and exploitation.

XLIX

Listen to the prayer songs of the nightingale in captivity
In this fragile cage of aging Panchabhootha composite;
It's striving prayers to join you is formidably fervid:
How the immortal can dwell in the mortal delicacy?

L

Living on the alms of your love and charity bliss
The bird turns too big to dwell in the cage, when
It flutters and pecks hard collapsing the feeble cage
And flies over it's debris in persuit of thee, master

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 07 May 2019

A masterly creation sir! Liked section L most.........................10

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Thank you very much Dillip. Your unreserved comments actually fill in me confidence and courage

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Savita Tyagi 02 May 2019

There is an heartfelt pain expressed in this prayer. Our actions seem so far removed from what we see in Nature that inspires and provides solace for us. Greatpem.

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Yes dear poetess, you are correct. The soul bird caged in the body has to fight umpteen adversities for sustenance untill the cage is broken. Thank you so much for sensing the soul of the poem

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Savita Tyagi 22 April 2019

Marvelous poem. Decay of moral and ethical values is society makes not only a poet’s heart cry but effects each and every individual being. The most fragile one leave the pain and hurt of cage. Longing for a avatar of Krishna or Christ is so desirable. Beautifully written poem in Rudraksh series. Thank you for sharing Damodaran Ji.

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Thank you very much Savithaji. The need of incarnation of God among us has too much been felt when the declining moral and ethical values are sickening the social souls

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Thank you very much Savitaji. Hope the words can convey my gratitu8de to you for such a magnanimously glorifying comments. Yes, we need God to incarnate for saving the innocents from atrocities and slavery

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