Rummager Poem by Andy Brookes

Rummager



broken on the rocks of your disapprobation
where did you get the right to rummage in my head.
decide what is good or bad and judge
in cold and calculated stance, who I am.

you cannot know just and so and so and so
where the vaulted spirit goes.
you have no key major or minor that can unlock this entity
nor can you see through my animus opaque.

Monday, January 14, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love and art,love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
bri edwards 15 January 2019

this is a new word to me: dis·ap·pro·ba·tion strong disapproval, typically on moral grounds. of course many people in my life have felt such towards me, ....i'm sure! ! ! WOW! such DIFFERENT definitions HERE: {i'll assume you mean def. # 2} an·i·mus 1. hostility or ill feeling. 2. motivation to do something. to MyPoemList. my main 'suggestion' is: use nor, not not at start of last line. bri :) i esp. enjoyed rummage in my head

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