there is, she said, a typo in stanza three, no full stop in the fourth line and you have; here I can imagine her high dudgeon,
as she types, a spellingerror in the last line.
you have no sense of punctuation and your grammar though fair
is too obscure.
I ask, what did you think of the poem?
give me critique so I can improve, something to hang my hat on.
on this she was strangely silent.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem