Tree Poems: 204 / 500

Reflections

Rating: 4.4

the years picture shadows play, hanging like baubles on the tree.
reflecting the time gone, time yet to be.

some radiant with treasures, string of lantern lights
dreams ready to become reality plump for the picking
others dark with sadness and pain, distant memories healed,
though the scars remain, to tickle like tinsel, added to experience.
my heart, ah hope still lies yet therefor future brightness.

Wednesday, September 12, 2018
Tree Poems: 204 / 500
Topic(s) of this poem: life
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 15 October 2018

'ah hope yet there lies still for future brightness.'- - - - This is the essence- - -Hope is what brightens the future. A wonderful poem, thanks for sharing.Congratulations for being selected as the Poet of the Day.

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Paul Brookes 15 October 2018

Thank you appreciated and taking the time to comment

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Tom Allport 15 October 2018

A wonderful poem of what was and what might be? Totally absorbing Andy.

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Paul Brookes 15 October 2018

Thank you it means a lot Appreciated thanks for reading

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 October 2018

My heart, ah hope yet there lies still for future brightness....this very line brings life and color to this poem! An excellent poem! Many congratulations for this beautiful poem being chosen as POD!

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A B Faniki 30 August 2019

Beautiful, simply beautiful. Yes hope indeed britens the future.Thanks for sharing this lovely poem

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Muzahidul Reza 16 October 2018

reflecting the time gone, time yet to be. (a great line) to make a chance..... but thus life goes..... without resolving..... thanks for sharing, you may like to comment on my poems

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Akhtar Jawad 15 October 2018

The video of time nicely reflected in a poem, congrats!

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 October 2018

Time gone! ! ! ! Time yet to be. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 15 October 2018

May the reflections be radiant with treasures. Congratulations for the honour and for the lovely poem.

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