amelia cavazos

Rythm Of The World

The sun rises in the morning, and sets at night. The sky begins to darken, but the moon gives off light. The sun lowers into the darkness, the moon rises into the sky. The stars pop out and look like fireflies. Once morning comes the sun begins to rise. The moon goes into the darkness, and so do the fireflies. The sudden darkness turns to light, and the rhythm repeats itself night after night.

Topic(s) of this poem: nature

Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 13, 2010
Poem Edited: Wednesday, February 17, 2016

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this was part of a school project but i went a little overboard.

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Comments about Rythm Of The World by amelia cavazos

  • Jazib KamalviJazib Kamalvi (6/21/2020 8:43:00 PM)

    Such a nice start, amelia. Read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.

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  • Chinedu DikeChinedu Dike (3/28/2020 6:24:00 AM)

    Well conceived and nicely crafted with artistic brilliance. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing, Amelia.

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  • Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet (7/16/2019 11:36:00 AM)

    AC. You may now like to read my poem
    LOVELY A C ALL IS CYCLIC

    READ MY MOM'S SMILES KINDLY

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  • Connor WhyteConnor Whyte (7/1/2016 12:31:00 AM)

    Great flow I enjoyed this very much, I would love to see more of your work.

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  • Dr Tony BrahminDr Tony Brahmin (2/17/2016 6:43:00 PM)

    Yes it is really Rhythm. sun, moon, stars, iight darkness. we shall praise God who created all this. thank you. tony

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  • Captain Herbert PoetryCaptain Herbert Poetry (5/17/2015 3:05:00 AM)

    The rhythm and flow of our lives. Good movement of words. NICE

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