Rythm Of The World Poem by amelia cavazos

Rythm Of The World

Rating: 5.0


The sun rises in the morning, and sets at night. The sky begins to darken, but the moon gives off light. The sun lowers into the darkness, the moon rises into the sky. The stars pop out and look like fireflies. Once morning comes the sun begins to rise. The moon goes into the darkness, and so do the fireflies. The sudden darkness turns to light, and the rhythm repeats itself night after night.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
this was part of a school project but i went a little overboard.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

The rhythm and flow of our lives. Good movement of words. NICE

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Jazib Kamalvi 21 June 2020

Such a nice start, amelia. Read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.

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Chinedu Dike 28 March 2020

Well conceived and nicely crafted with artistic brilliance. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing, Amelia.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 16 July 2019

AC. You may now like to read my poem LOVELY A C ALL IS CYCLIC READ MY MOM'S SMILES KINDLY

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Connor Whyte 01 July 2016

Great flow I enjoyed this very much, I would love to see more of your work.

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Dr Antony Theodore 17 February 2016

Yes it is really Rhythm. sun, moon, stars, iight darkness. we shall praise God who created all this. thank you. tony

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