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Rating: 5.0

Once more we stand upon this bloodied ground,
In this cruel game of fate, we are ensnared,
Our souls alas to hell are surely bound,
As flames and screams fill the wretched air.
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Paul Hensley
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon 16 September 2024

This poem is selected Poem Of The Day Members on the 15th September 2024. Congratulations

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Sylvia Frances Chan 15 September 2024

TWO: in showing what he means. It reminds me of the painting of the Dutch painter Jeroen Bosch, gruesome and surreal. Exciting to read, fascinating to follow. TOP Marks 5 Stars

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Sylvia Frances Chan 15 September 2024

ONE: first of all to get into your vision, before this poem can be understood properly. An event outside of ordinary everyday life, as exciting as it can be, the writer of this has absolutely succeeded

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D.N. Rebb 15 September 2024

Very well written. Love your style. Please write more.

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Jayne Louise Davies 15 September 2024

Congratulations on member poem of the day! Very well deserved *****

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Poignant but profound poem. Top score

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Makes a poignant reading..

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