Sad Poem by john tiong chunghoo

Sad

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dusk to dusk
this sadness
carries a shade
the heart finds
hard to bear

the melancholy
scarlet of dusk
an artist keenly
touches up to portray
the remaining
breaths of the day

the soft breeze
carries your soft sigh
and carress
to bid me farewell

the quiet dusk is
choked with
my longings
for you while divinity
witholds its
consolations
and looks at me
through blood shot eyes
a breathless
conflagration of
copper red,
orange and gold

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 22 April 2007

Love and remembrance come back with the dusk. Like the last lines of a lingering song. Beautiful poem. Sandra

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john tiong chunghoo

john tiong chunghoo

Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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