Saturday, February 3, 2018

Sad And Alone Comments

Rating: 5.0

With warm and teary eyes
She could not sleep in the night
All hopes in her mind flies
And nothing is alright.
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Baishali Sinha
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Prativa Rani 28 February 2018

Thanks Baishali for this lovely poem.10

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 28 February 2018

Welcome to our Poem hunter brotherhood... thanks for this lovely debut poem. Lost in the world, she wandered in haste To find an arm, where she could rest. A beautiful one to start with dear Baishali. 10+++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 February 2018

A beautiful little poem! Pulsating expression! My favorite lines: The smile she had put on, made the frame/So that the sorrow hidden never came/She fought her fate all alone in pain..A promising start! Congrats.

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Jazib Kamalvi 04 February 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Baishali. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Rajnish Manga 03 February 2018

welcome to this forum, Baishali. Thanks for sharing a powerful poem which guides us not to give up but take on the adversities to win over. I quote: To find an arm, where she could rest. And waited for all her sorrow to refrain.

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Bipasha D 03 February 2018

A poem of hope. Welcome to PH Baishali

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