Sad Square Of Blue Poem by Susy Evelyne

Sad Square Of Blue

Rating: 4.5


A birthday has come
With no one to fill it.
On the calendar it lies,
Outlined; a sad square of blue.

Like a pool, still,
Waiting for someone to come
And dive in.
Or a glass vase that has held
Many a lovely rose
But today holds none.

Friday, October 4, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: birthday
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Written spring 2013
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 28 November 2013

Your poem is beautiful! Sad, void, feelings. 'Or a glass vase that has held Many a lovely rose But today holds none.' Touched me.

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 04 October 2013

Sad but a very lovely write, one can feel the loneliness and the truthfulness it conveys, Beautiful.

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