Tuesday, March 20, 2018

Sad Trick Comments

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He had a dream that he was chasing chicks.
When his girlfriend appeared in his dream.
And started giving him licks.
Life was sure playing some sad tricks.
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Lamar Cole
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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 March 2018

Dream with sadness has been astutely painted. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks.

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Nudershada Cabanes 21 March 2018

A dream that did not end nicely. Well penned.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 21 March 2018

Lamar, such a well penned poem👍👍👍

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Rini shibu 21 March 2018

Girlfriend in dreams intense love..Beautiful poem

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Rajnish Manga 20 March 2018

Lovely poem with an interesting narrative. Thanks.

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