Sadness Poem by Jamie Parker

Sadness

Rating: 1.8


Left alone in the cold to die
All around on me, people spy
I scratch for the food I eat
And drink water that's lame
Oh and how all the uver people have so much fame!
when I have none
All I have is the cloths I lie in
My home is not grand...it's a bin
All on my own
Frozen to death
I close my eyes...and take my last breath

Friday, February 4, 2005
Topic(s) of this poem: food
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sean De Montfort 15 October 2005

once again good content very good.Poor spelling and poor structure and would be better if rhymed

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Jamie Parker 09 March 2005

Thanks everyone for rating it ten. It's the only one that is! (: Jamie

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