The Stormy Sea Poem by Jamie Parker

The Stormy Sea

Rating: 2.2


The waves are twisting and turning
Churning and werling
The little boat sways from side to side
And all the fish, have gone to hide
The lightning crashes on to the shores behind
When will the weather, be as much as kind?
but oh!
the waves stop clashing!
The sun has come out!
The whales cheer
by sending water from there spouts
The boat is thankfull
the fish come out
The fishermen Jump and shout

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edgar 15 January 2020

Very bad poem I don’t like it at all 0/10

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Sean De Montfort 15 October 2005

Better structure and it was good even without rhyme but could be better

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Theodora Onken 04 February 2005

Let me guess, you are the brave sailor? Theodora Onken

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