Wednesday, July 29, 2009

Saint Or Death? Comments

Rating: 5.0

i see him coming down the road
in his hand a sickle he holds.
he is dressed in a long black robe
torn and tattered and mighty old.
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louis rams
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 01 August 2009

a very touching write which gives a lot of hope at the end....very well narrated throughout

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hey.. I'm adding this to a group on facebook. nice message.............. thanks bro

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Heather S 30 July 2009

this is such a wonderful poem, i like the narrated poems you do.i love it. thanks again Heather

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Kranthi Pothineni 30 July 2009

Well narrated, the ending is good. Full marks for your narration.

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Shashendra Amalshan 30 July 2009

Hello sir... Hey you know what happened.. I posted a rather longish comment on this one and site troubled.. so i v to write it again..lolzz... First got to say that this is an exhilarating read.... some parts here sent a chill up my spine too... very thrilling read.. I generally like narrative ones.. many tens for you to composing this write…. I like narrative your style.. you keep the reader interested through out! ! ! I ll send you a mail sir.. With love shan

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~ Jon London ~ 29 July 2009

Very dark and deep my friend....the imagery outstanding...the composition touches the very core of the reader......excellent penning louis...10++++

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Christine Kerr 29 July 2009

Outch, Almost brought a tear to my eye, There are three people I want to send this on to. You sure know how to dig deep louis, Great eye opener 10++

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April Rose Sta Cruz 29 July 2009

wow amazing i like it

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