i see him coming down the road
in his hand a sickle he holds.
he is dressed in a long black robe
torn and tattered and mighty old.
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hey.. I'm adding this to a group on facebook. nice message.............. thanks bro
this is such a wonderful poem, i like the narrated poems you do.i love it. thanks again Heather
Well narrated, the ending is good. Full marks for your narration.
Hello sir... Hey you know what happened.. I posted a rather longish comment on this one and site troubled.. so i v to write it again..lolzz... First got to say that this is an exhilarating read.... some parts here sent a chill up my spine too... very thrilling read.. I generally like narrative ones.. many tens for you to composing this write…. I like narrative your style.. you keep the reader interested through out! ! ! I ll send you a mail sir.. With love shan
Very dark and deep my friend....the imagery outstanding...the composition touches the very core of the reader......excellent penning louis...10++++
Outch, Almost brought a tear to my eye, There are three people I want to send this on to. You sure know how to dig deep louis, Great eye opener 10++
a very touching write which gives a lot of hope at the end....very well narrated throughout