Aakash Nengroo

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Salvation... - Poem by Aakash Nengroo

burning sighs...
hurling voices...
saddened heart
and seperation...

falling leaves...
forming heaps..
leaving birds...
and seperation...

caged feelings...
aged memories..
raging love
and seperation...

misty eyes..
hasty breath
drowning life
and seperation...

shining face
growing bright..
cracking dawn
and seperation...

closing eyes....
say goodbyes..
stopped heart....
and there you are...

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Comments about Salvation... by Aakash Nengroo

  • Roxanne Dubarry (8/6/2017 12:31:00 AM)

    Great poem! Lovers meet and then become separated. (Report)Reply

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  • Ebba Poole (6/25/2017 3:21:00 PM)

    Oh I do love this
    It reads easily and it is nice to see that in poems as it is so rare to see.
    Thanks for the recomend
    -EP
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  • Dr Tony BrahminDr Tony Brahmin (6/24/2017 12:53:00 AM)

    haaaaaaaaa this is beautifulllll rhyming as i read and so easy and simple words you used... very easy to understand at the first sight.....marvelous. you have a rare ability to write clearly without ambiguity..... this is an ability. so many young poets think that using words that are not simple help them to give an impression that poem is something special. it is not true.. thank you for clarity and simplicity.. thank you dear poet, tony (Report)Reply

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  • Bernard F. AsuncionBernard F. Asuncion (6/23/2017 6:37:00 PM)

    Reminds me of the song SALVATION popularized by MICHAEL LEARNS TO ROCK... Rated 10++++
    You may visit my TAKE TIME TO THINK and DON'T BLOCK THE DRIVE WAY...
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  • Jazib KamalviJazib Kamalvi (6/23/2017 5:36:00 PM)

    So many shades. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 22, 2017

Poem Edited: Thursday, June 22, 2017


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