Same Fate Again Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Same Fate Again

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I hear the striking waves
From sea and blame
The distance is so much
I can not see her as such

I imagine her at another end
Touching the waves to send
Her feelings through waves around
I have nice means to have found

I go in morning to the beach
Synchronize her time to reach
Touch the water and feel pulse
Her heart beats are felt of course

Such is an imagination
It is sign of bond and relation
We have not seen each other
But feel with sky’s over cover

I imagine her whisper
With lovely sweet offer
“Do not go away” when water recedes
I feel sad and slowly concede

I have reason to be upset
She is in time and never late
I used to tell her and simply state
Do you feel the same destiny and fate?

Saturday, April 12, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 April 2014

I hear the striking waves From sea and blame

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 April 2014

Nice Kanniappan Kanniappan 1 hour ago Nice Comment

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 April 2014

.... I AM ME... Excellent!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 April 2014

welcome mericel remirez 2 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 April 2014

Shujat Ahmad, Rohani Daud and Durga Patva like this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome 2 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 April 2014

very nice poem Hassen Gara1 hour ago beautifully written.I invite you kindly to read and rate my latest poem A BIT OF GRATITUDE on poetry.com Hassen Gara 520750.Your feedback is so important. Thank you. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 April 2014

good David Omega1 hour ago nice flow Comment +1

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