Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 698,713 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Same Vigor - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

I witness fall
But discourage at all
I get up with full might
As I believe it right

I get glimpse
Of bright future in sense
That makes me to stand again
With all the might to regain

I get advance warning
That makes me warming
Against possible danger
I have crunch and appetite for hunger

Not that I may always have success
But it may make me to struggle more for access
It may need even bold chase
Yet it may not end bad phase

Let us employ same vigor
As it may earn honor
In return for bold approach
The life is made as such


Comments about Same Vigor by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/11/2013 4:20:00 AM)

    Nathan Luke1 hour ago
    I like the message overall but really alot of times the bold and daring approach ends badly thats why at least a little bit of caution is probably wise
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    very good
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/11/2013 4:20:00 AM)

    D V1 hour ago
    ``I get glimpse
    Of bright future in sense
    That makes me to stand again
    With all the might to regain`` really liked this line
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/11/2013 4:17:00 AM)

    Love it.


    Margareth Debrosse1 hour ago
    Thanks for sharing.
    Comment +1
    Inspire
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/11/2013 4:17:00 AM)

    Rasi Rana1 hour ago
    Inspiring for the matured ones)
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    Nice Job
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/11/2013 4:16:00 AM)

    Daniella Anastasio1 hour ago
    The fourth stanza is my favorite, very relatable, good job
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/10/2013 11:01:00 PM)

    I witness fall
    But discourage at all
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 10, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, December 11, 2013


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