Same Vigor Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Same Vigor

Rating: 5.0


I witness fall
But discourage at all
I get up with full might
As I believe it right

I get glimpse
Of bright future in sense
That makes me to stand again
With all the might to regain

I get advance warning
That makes me warming
Against possible danger
I have crunch and appetite for hunger

Not that I may always have success
But it may make me to struggle more for access
It may need even bold chase
Yet it may not end bad phase

Let us employ same vigor
As it may earn honor
In return for bold approach
The life is made as such

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 December 2013

I witness fall But discourage at all

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 December 2013

Nathan Luke1 hour ago I like the message overall but really alot of times the bold and daring approach ends badly thats why at least a little bit of caution is probably wise Comment 0 very good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 December 2013

D V1 hour ago ``I get glimpse Of bright future in sense That makes me to stand again With all the might to regain`` really liked this line

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 December 2013

Love it. Margareth Debrosse1 hour ago Thanks for sharing. Comment +1 Inspire

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 December 2013

Rasi Rana1 hour ago Inspiring for the matured ones) Comment +1 Nice Job

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 December 2013

Daniella Anastasio1 hour ago The fourth stanza is my favorite, very relatable, good job

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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