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Sand And Water

Rating: 4.6

Returning to shore,
An ocean and its secrets;
To ebb the curiosity of quotidian being,
Whose essence thirst for far off adventures;
Hidden in recesses of secured consciousness;
While gulls dive with their bird determination;
Each beakful, each morsel,
A hunter’s bounty received to honour a life,
Of existence, and of predestined creation;
Continuing in abeyance, a ritual union of creator,

Universe patterned, charted, set on a course definite;
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 10 January 2010

Very nice wording a job well done

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Leslie Philibert 05 July 2013

Not bad, maybe a little too literary, heavy with vocabulary...

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Anita Sehgal 06 July 2012

well sketched... great words

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Bernard Snyder 05 July 2012

Thank you Gillena for sharing such a lovely poem. I will definitely continue to read more of your 'pieces!

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Karen Sinclair 05 July 2012

Just beautifully put... bravo and congratulations on read of the day...karen

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Chinedu Dike 02 December 2019

A poignant rendition written in heightened poetic diction with conviction. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing, Gillena.

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Gajanan Mishra 05 July 2014

I like the poem with its secrets in ocean, thanks.

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oceans, shores are beautiful subjects for poetry and here the poet wrtten a good poem.

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Jasbir Chatterjee 05 July 2014

I like this poem and I learnt a new word today (quotidian) . I feel it would have been more touching had the words been fitted into a rhythmic pattern.

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Otteri Selvakumar 05 July 2013

nice writing goodness words Gillena Cox mam

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