Saturday, July 29, 2006

Sand In The Sea Comments

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from afar i see the waves
myriad lines of luminous white
galloping as if on a mission to conquer
propelling successive waves
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john tiong chunghoo
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Debora Short 29 July 2006

What lovely a write! 'from afar i see the waves myriad lines of luminous white galloping as if on a mission to conquer propelling successive waves in another sea of emotions' This imagery projects incredibly deep beauty threaded with the pensive views of a mature heart. Very impressive, John! ~ Debora

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Nalini Hebbar 29 July 2006

very beautiful poem...i love the sea and this is a very deep poem about the sea's power...and its power over our soul...love...NH

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Francesca Johnson 29 July 2006

A lovely vision of the waves 'galloping as if on a mission to conquer.' And their power to turn rocks to sand....... Yes, it is a talented person who can turn these visions into paintings. But you have turned these words into pictures, too, John. Love, Fran xx

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Nice piece, forces of nature in act which no one can stop.

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Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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