Fay Slimm

Rookie - 112 Points (Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

Saturday Shopping! - Poem by Fay Slimm

I leave early to visit the market.
Weekend shopping gets more of a battle.
I scrape paint off the car as I park it,
Then forget parking-fee in the hassle.
The pushchair for baby needs mending, an
Ominous wobble begins in the wheel.
The dog slips his lead and chases a man
In a van, then he won't come back to heel.
I much later arrive at the fruit stall,
Dog, baby and wheel all by now screeching.
I grab the fruit bag which splits, apples fall
All over the floor, - I begin reaching,
And knock over more, - but it's eggs this time!
'Anyone breaking will pay' says the sign!
I laugh as I pick up my parking fine!
Is there anyone else with luck like mine?


Comments about Saturday Shopping! by Fay Slimm

  • Bob Blackwell (10/8/2008 2:22:00 PM)

    Sounds like you had a fun Saturday morning, we all have days like this, it how we react that does the harm, sounds like you worked it out just fine...writing a poem made it fine. Loved it Fay. thankyou Bobxx (Report)Reply

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  • Kevin Eaglesfield (10/6/2008 6:16:00 PM)

    Hi Fay, Precisely why I do my shopping mid-week.Like Tom says, great fun.Seen it and done it (Report)Reply

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  • Ian Bowen (10/6/2008 6:02:00 PM)

    Fay, I take it you never picked up any bargains then? The good thing about your bad day, was that you got a great poem out of the experience.10/10

    Ian
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  • Tom BalchTom Balch (10/6/2008 5:20:00 PM)

    HaHaHa! ! ! What a great fun read Fay, gets my 10 regards Tom (Report)Reply

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  • Andrew mark Wilkinson (10/5/2008 9:17:00 AM)

    It's god's pay back for all the men that their wifes drag to the shops when footballs on tv.. Sorry you had a bad time.. Andrew 10 (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 5, 2008



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