Satyawati -29 Comments
29. What Haste Yields
I sent Ambika to his chambers,
"Pray for a wise and strong son".
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Hi Becca, Thank you for reading my poems and blessing me with your encouraging observations. Obliged
Powerfully and beautifully written! .. Ever so heart moving! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. Ever so many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++
You are a storyteller as well as a poet and you combine the two in a fluid and intelligent way. I must read on! ! 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Hi Susan, As have stated below, this is what the epic says. Whether this could be true, is a matter to be reasearched into. The secrets of conception, may be women know better. So Susan, may be you can tell us more about it. Thank you for coming this far in this series. And a bowed head for those trillion tens....
A healthy Child was born as a result of honor and respect where as hatred resulted in weak and pale. Well penned.
Yes Rini. This is what the epic says. I do not know whether it happens that way. What the Medics would say about it? Whether any research has gone into this aspect...
The horror n shock of birthing a blind n weak child and the joy of birthing a healthy child both conveyed here artfully. Nice, easy flow of narration makes it v readable n reader can connect with the content deeply.
Hi Nosheen This part of the story is carried exactly as in the epic. Great that you liked it. Thank you...
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12/22/2025 9:02:19 PM # 1.0.0
..to her was born A son, with intelligent, noble features! Appreciated this beautiful excerpt and a few sapient comments of a few poet friends!