Save Me Poem by Caitlin Wood

Save Me

Rating: 5.0


Tik tock Tik Tock…
The clock gnaws at my head,
Teasing me, disturbing me, taunting me.
When lies became reality,
My heart began to fade.
I couldnt seem to find myself,
Lost in an uncontrollable daze.
It got hard to breathe,
The world went black.
My mind vacant, meaningless, bare.
Somehow I see you,
Through the mist and the fog.
Somehow you save me,
Though I had given up.
You mean more to me then I can say,
You have my life, my heart, my love!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 23 July 2011

Excellent poem with a lot of depth. Fine and vivid imagery. The poem has a strong structure. I like and rate it 10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 1. Thanks in advance. Warm regards Akmal

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