Saving Grace Poem by Aqeb Benazir Ibn Minar

Saving Grace

Rating: 5.0


Introduction: Don't you quit no matter how hard it is, no matter how much you struggle. This is called life; this is the test, with its twists and turns. Make the best out if it. We just have to believe in Almighty's light, His saving grace and follow the Grande hope up to the end of the tunnel, until the end of our lives.

When time gets tough, days seem long
As sometimes it does, you feel the song,
When heroes depart, hearts sink below
And most of us smile, as we feel them glow,
When past calls back to remind us of them
Some tears fall down, even out of gem.

When life gets rough, through those tough times
Just don't give up, on hope we survive,
We wonder how everything's still here
That's when we believe, we have Him to share,
Faith is that bird, which reminds us at night
By singing its songs, that calls us to light

Confusions arise, when fear overcomes
Happiness glow dim, as trusts come undone,
Hearts and rules are made to be broken
In order to improve those that's unspoken,
Some may confound the truth with the lies
That's why He gave, us these two eyes.

You make your own choice with the dreams you shelter
That seems way uphill, just makes you stronger,
If you fall thousand times, you don't quit the tour
You succeed one time and you reach your goal,
To some it seems hard, to you it's the art
Some may just quit but you try and try, till the new start.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ebi Robert 11 August 2011

When time gets tough you will blend.................Interesting poem

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Elizabeth Grace 10 August 2011

I like this very much.

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Craig Anderson 09 August 2011

The moral of the piece is never let them beat you down, never give up and there is always a brighter tomorrow. Loved this piece. Regards. Craig.

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Nguyen Nguyen 05 August 2011

It is a wonderful poem touching deeply into into the soul and filing it with hope faith in the Almighty while living in a harsh world

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Vangile Mtyali 05 August 2011

wow, how true is what you wrote about n this poem gives hope to all. LOVE IT

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Anhelica Velasquez 12 November 2011

i love it. its amazing! i've then again ur an amazing poet. 'That seems whay up hill just makes you stronger': D ill member that thnx! haha mazing poem i mean it :)

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Anthony Zeigler 29 August 2011

'Confusions arise, when fear overcomes Happiness glow dim, as trusts come undone' This is deep. Really deep. The way you write brings me to deep thought. the things you say makes my mind go WOW. Nice poem.

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Allemagne Roßmann 22 August 2011

And there cannot be another way of saving grace than your poetry.Wonderful job here.

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Christopher Cariad 18 August 2011

Amazing! ! ! A inspirational poem to keep one pushing towards there goals, no matter whats tempting to hold them back!

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Debra Martin 16 August 2011

Wonderfully said, I refuse to quit....

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