Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 412,198 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Say Good Night - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

We wish all good night
It is customary on our part
Great custom and tradition
With solid bond and relation

Even stranger may find it as honor
Even though gesture can be considered minor
Few words of belonging may spring surprise
It is full of oneness with promises

Whole of universe goes in dark
Almost under magic spell to start
The day has brought lot much happiness
Any individual may want night to spent with brightness

So “Good night” address means a lot
Day is desperately and vigorously fought
When you receive few words for sweet sleep
That makes you delighted with good mood to keep

Make it habit to say “good night”
That keeps person to feel right
It is parting gift before going to sleep
Your heart may beat with happy beep

Comments about Say Good Night by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/5/2014 8:41:00 PM)

    Scott Ransopher likes this.

    Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh!
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/5/2014 9:37:00 AM)

    wow, such compassion

    Kevin HooverLess than a minute ago
    you must be a father, or he must be in you! that is beautiful brother!
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/5/2014 9:36:00 AM)

    Nikita ShieldsLess than a minute ago
    I loved your poem! How you took something so simple as saying goodnight to the next level!
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/5/2014 9:36:00 AM)

    excellently depicted

    Ritam BasuLess than a minute ago
    good night sir, have a nice sleep.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/5/2014 9:23:00 AM)

    We wish all good night
    It is customary on our part
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, February 5, 2014

Poem Edited: Wednesday, February 5, 2014

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