Not Long Left

Rookie (17.05.1981 / The Molten Core)

Saying Goodbye To The Sea - Poem by Not Long Left

looking out,
yet looking in,
a million tinkerbells,
sparkling
singing sweetly,
in the frosty fresh sea air, .
moon manages the waves,
moon manages my mind,
sand,
endless grains,
of weathered rock,
seep through my fingers,
a yellow rainfall of time.
somewhere,
not to far away,
a chorus of hot faced laughter,
shatters the peace,
of the beach,
slowly,
slowly
i rise,
look to the skies,
and sigh.


Comments about Saying Goodbye To The Sea by Not Long Left

  • (12/1/2005 8:12:00 AM)


    this poem is very evocative. this is the spirit of the truth... ahem. good images, very good images. and the words run like water. (Report) Reply

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  • (12/1/2005 6:18:00 AM)


    Wow. Excellent. A couple of small typo's distract the flow but otherwise an excellent piece Vincent. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 1, 2005

Poem Edited: Thursday, December 1, 2005


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