Scorched Heart Comments

Oh- forgot the rating. You get a dark and shadowy 10+++++++++++++++++++ for scaring me half out of my wits and I cannot afford it! ! ! I think your Kerouac series is going to be successful, my friend.

Ah- - - now I see. The first five poems I read today were so unlike you- -angry, a seething, loathing, revengeful angry- -I am not accustomed to this darkness and this fixation on death from you- - then I read Poet's Notes. In the nick of time- I was fixing to saddle up Rocky Too and ride to the rescue [and I'm too old to be doing that- probably croak before I hit the Canadian border] Now reassure me by writing a poem full of light and joy and love of life, K?

A poetic arrow to the heart. A definite 10.

Sometimes it happens in breaking up condition and words of heat are not expressed well. This provokes thought. An amazing sharing is done...10