Beyond the sea of crumpled dreams
the fractured souls sit
lost within a maze of discarded thoughts
on a plateau of inconsistencies.
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All the discordant words in here really did justice to the theme and the feelings. It has that ascendancy of abstraction style that is one of my favorites.
A very poignant write David, but with so much truth in it....I love the imagery used..great piece indeed - thanks 10++
as they tumble in a drought of words discarded annually. ................................................... It's Exclusively dynamical expression, David Fine poem...10... / Thank you.../ Tsira