Friday, October 9, 2009

Sea Of Crumpled Dreams Comments

Rating: 5.0

Beyond the sea of crumpled dreams
the fractured souls sit
lost within a maze of discarded thoughts
on a plateau of inconsistencies.
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Tsira Goge 10 October 2009

as they tumble in a drought of words discarded annually. ................................................... It's Exclusively dynamical expression, David Fine poem...10... / Thank you.../ Tsira

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T McH 10 October 2009

Your analogies reign supreme. t x

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Carol Gall 10 October 2009

your words sing wondeful 10

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Meggie Gultiano 10 October 2009

beautiful imagery..Lovely words..

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Patti Masterman 10 October 2009

All the discordant words in here really did justice to the theme and the feelings. It has that ascendancy of abstraction style that is one of my favorites.

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Sandra Martyres 09 October 2009

A very poignant write David, but with so much truth in it....I love the imagery used..great piece indeed - thanks 10++

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