adil khan

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Search Of Light - Poem by adil khan

thats not the thing that i wann from my life
thats the dream that i watch at my night

its a something, something something
differ thing

its a something, something something
better thing

i am in search of light
search of light

it is my search of light
seach of light


Comments about Search Of Light by adil khan

  • (3/18/2015 3:39:00 AM)

    Rhythmically light and lilting poem, would love to see more description, I think it would be beneficial. Repetition is not always a good idea. Thank you for sharing, RoseAnn (Report)Reply

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  • Yasmin Khan (5/30/2013 1:15:00 AM)

    A lyrical poem as if the poet was singing it....it dims down towards the end. (Report)Reply

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  • S.zaynab Kamoonpuri (3/17/2013 8:39:00 AM)

    A fine songlike poem i liked. D search for light is always beneficial poet bro. (Report)Reply

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  • (10/31/2012 10:46:00 AM)

    tnx for the comment.actually i write it as a lyrics of a gong thats its looking some odd (Report)Reply

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  • (10/31/2012 8:29:00 AM)

    Good Try. But you can improve on your poetic skills.
    Keep writing!
    Takecare.
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 31, 2012



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