thats not the thing that i wann from my life
thats the dream that i watch at my night
its a something, something something
differ thing
its a something, something something
better thing
i am in search of light
search of light
it is my search of light
seach of light
A lyrical poem as if the poet was singing it....it dims down towards the end.
A fine songlike poem i liked. D search for light is always beneficial poet bro.
tnx for the comment.actually i write it as a lyrics of a gong thats its looking some odd
Good Try. But you can improve on your poetic skills. Keep writing! Takecare.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Rhythmically light and lilting poem, would love to see more description, I think it would be beneficial. Repetition is not always a good idea. Thank you for sharing, RoseAnn