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Search Of Light

Rating: 3.5
thats not the thing that i wann from my life
thats the dream that i watch at my night

its a something, something something
differ thing

its a something, something something
better thing

i am in search of light
search of light
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Roseann Shawiak 18 March 2015
Rhythmically light and lilting poem, would love to see more description, I think it would be beneficial. Repetition is not always a good idea. Thank you for sharing, RoseAnn
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Yasmin Khan 30 May 2013
A lyrical poem as if the poet was singing it....it dims down towards the end.
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 17 March 2013
A fine songlike poem i liked. D search for light is always beneficial poet bro.
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adil Khan 31 October 2012
tnx for the comment.actually i write it as a lyrics of a gong thats its looking some odd
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Shivani Misra 31 October 2012
Good Try. But you can improve on your poetic skills. Keep writing! Takecare.
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