Season Of Sun Rays Basking Sunbathing Poem by Terence George Craddock

Season Of Sun Rays Basking Sunbathing

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summer is season of skin sun rays basking sunbathing
mine if I am not mindful is a sunburn pure painful
felt for days excessive rays cause sunburn a skinful
felt for days for sure feeling burnt for cure waiting


Copyright © Terence George Craddock

Sunday, January 3, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: summer
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired by the poem 'Life Has A Meaning' by the poet Kumarmani Mahakul.
Dedicated to the poet Kumarmani Mahakul.
Written in December 2015 and January 2016 on the 18.12.2015 & 4.11.2016.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mihaela Pirjol 05 January 2016

The Sun - like Love: seduces us with its warmth, pleasure and delight; but too much exposure and expression, can burn our skin and heart....

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 January 2016

Seasons give mark on life. Winter or summer hotness or coldness we have to bear trust to cure ourselves. Seasonal changes are teachings for us. There is hidden wisdom of God we need to absorb. We have to face the truth. Waiting for being cured by God is definitely fantastic. A nice poem with excellent perception is shared here. Thank you very much once again. I am deeply touched and delighted by your poetic gift. May God bring happiness for you and family....10

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