Seasons Of Love Poem by Valerie Dohren

Seasons Of Love

Rating: 4.9


Our love came in the gentle Spring,
So sweet and fresh and true -
When we were young and unafraid,
And all was clear and new.

It blossomed in the Summertime,
And came to fullest bloom -
We lay beneath the Cedar Tree,
Our love there to consume.

But in the chill of Autumn mist,
It then began to wane -
No longer did we feel the joy,
Nor would we e’er again.

So as the Winter gripped our hearts,
Our hands then slipped apart -
We said goodbye and turned away,
As love did then depart.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Passionate Reader 25 June 2013

Simply beautiful. It's written with a great flow. lovely! ! !

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..... W@king Up..... 25 June 2013

Love can leave things behind, but sometimes we leave behind love under that cedar tree. A sad story... But so transfixing while read. Nice work. -W

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Valsa George 25 June 2013

A natural withering away in winter after a sprouting in spring, a blooming in summer and a ripening in autumn! Enjoyed these seasons of love!

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Danny Draper 25 June 2013

The seasons of love and its turning. A nice romantic if not sad write.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 25 June 2013

According to Seasons love is a bed of roses and then its a star on the wane! BEAUTIFUL WRITE!

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Rupesh R.k Babu 22 July 2013

you are truly gifted, we expect many wonders from you

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Piyush Dey 21 July 2013

How beautifully expressed! It touched my heart.... A profound write!

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Hans Vr 29 June 2013

happens to so many relationships. good write, Val

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Hazel Durham 29 June 2013

So sad, like the seasons change so can love change! Superb write!

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Heather Wilkins 25 June 2013

such a beautiful write using the seasons as a backdrop. I like very much.

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