C.J. Heck

Rookie - 255 Points (August 10 / Born in Columbus OH - living in Florida)

Secret Room - Poem by C.J. Heck

A little room within my heart
has a door that wears a star
with a weathered name emblazoned there.
This is where you are.

It's not a large room, tucked away,
but where my soul can see
just where it is in case I need
a precious memory.

The door is safely closed now
for a time that's yet to come,
but when and if it does,
the door will melt away, my love.


Comments about Secret Room by C.J. Heck

  • (2/7/2005 10:09:00 AM)


    Nice, though not innovative nor inventive nor original imagery. Jerked at the chords of my mindsoul. Brims over with feeling. Nice!
    BW
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  • (2/7/2005 8:17:00 AM)


    since it's jokes day for me (did I not thunk of you this very day...) - glad you popped up again... (Report) Reply

  • (2/7/2005 8:14:00 AM)


    Oh that's so... so...sad (in the old sense of the word, full to the measure) and lovely (in the old sense of the word) ...thanks. (Report) Reply

  • (2/7/2005 8:00:00 AM)


    Nice to see another rhyming poet here. There don't seem to be many of us. I like this very much, C.J. Beautiful in its intended simplicity. Very straightforward. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 7, 2005



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