Secretive Hiccups Poem by v.m.saraswathy munuswamy

Secretive Hiccups

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solitary mind sometimes whistles alone
and play melodious notes from the deserted flutes
in mired madness to shy and retire
though.....wired to recognize the group
self plunges to receive and transmit in peace.

Authentically lunatic on top mood swing
a midst loneliness and forgotten by all
to seldom the crowd or avoid to pair up
but have secretive hiccups, in solitary world
lives just by trusting only....... the repertoire calls

Monday, September 5, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 05 September 2016

Forgotten by all! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy 05 September 2016

welcome dear poet, thanks a million

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Dr Antony Theodore 05 September 2016

Whistling solitary mind, melodies of deserted flutes.......loneliness, forgotten by all...secretive hiccups i have only collected expressions from your poem........you are really a gifted poetess. God bless u. dont fall into despair and loneliness. a love can cure all. that is my experience..

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V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy 05 September 2016

Thanks a million pleasure is mine to receive comments from you welcome

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